Monday, March 16, 2009

Ron Miller needs two pages to describe a woman's body in his novel Silk and Steel

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Vaniel has scanned some pages from Ron Miller's fantasy novel Silk and Steel. The highlight of Ron's novel has to be pages 96 and 97 which were reserved for the description of Bronwyn's body. That's right! Two full pages! Bronwyn is the lead female character in Silk and Steel. Vaniel says, "I mean, one or two of those descriptions are vaguely interesting to put emphasis on some particular body part. Two pages worth, however, is absurd and ridiculous, especially as much of it makes no sense at all, and made me wonder if I'd fallen asleep while reading it and dreamed it up it was so bad." You should also read the next four pages here. Ouch. My eyes!

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Too much detail! too much! too much!

Anonymous said...

That's the weirdest description of breasts ever.

Anonymous said...

Is that a fantasy novel or some bad erotica?

Anonymous said...

I would like to date a girl with such description.

Anonymous said...

Think he wrote this novel at the fruits and vegetables section in the supermarket...

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